Stoically accepted
this solitary
and hopeless journey
leads to nowhere
Endlessly wandering
for a long while
unable to find my way
unsure of the end of the line
One fine day
our cosmos collide
exploding between us
a kaleidoscope of vibrant colors
I now see the world
in a different light
with more depth
and incredible clarity
You now filled up
what was lacking
satiating me entirely
when no one can
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Nicely penned!
Check mine.
https://tenaciousbeliever07.wordpress.com/2018/09/10/untitled/
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Thank you for reading my poem!
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Youβre welcome!
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Nice!!
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Thank you!
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This is beautiful Winnie!
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Thank you, Christy! π€
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Fantabulous as usual. Thanks Winnie dear. πππ
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Ohhh! Thank you, my friend! Your comment made me smile. ππ€
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Welcome dear friend. You deserve it.
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beautiful description of when souls collide
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Thank you, Gina! πβ€οΈ
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So beautiful!β€
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Thank you, dear! π
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Two hearts and souls melted together in harmony! π β€οΈ
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Yes! πβ€οΈ
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Such beautiful words, so vivid and satisfying. Wonderful work, Winnie. β€
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Thank you! Your lovely comment put a smile on my face. πβ€οΈ
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Beautiful
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Thank you! π€
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Beautiful Winnie! May that Glorious feeling, forever be what fills your heart!
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Thank you, Warren! Amen! π
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I think your work is grate but I beg to disagree with line 17 &18 ,Where you said:
You now filled up
What was lacking
I believe that as a human being, no one can complete you not even your soulmate. Except God, nobody canβt totally fill you up. The poem is romantic and uplifting but the mentality that says anyone can fill someone up is wrong. I do love how you write so keep it upπͺπΌ but remember that love between a man and a woman requires both party to be whole and already filled up. One love girl, PEACE βπ»
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate it. I also respect your opinion. Have a great day.
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Beautiful! π
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Beautiful πππ
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Thank you! πβ€οΈπΉ
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Beautiful and deep. A pleasure to return to read your poetry.
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Thank you, Drew! I missed your lovely comments. I appreciate you dropping by
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Beautifully written Winnie π
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Thank you very much π
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Very beautiful!β€οΈ
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Iβve loved the way youβve explained the conceptβ¦Very very beautiful<3 β€
Also, I've just uploaded a short poem on what not Love isβ¦..I'd be glad to receive your inputs.. here's the link: http://thesoultalks10.com/fresh-farm-love-love-is-not/
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Thank you so much! π
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Beautifully written! Such hope and joy in your words.
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Thank you so much!
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