She touched her parted lips
with trembling fingertips
lips still tender
from the fervent kiss, he gave her
It started with a slow probing in lilt with a moaning cello
which heightened to an exciting crescendo
their billowing breaths mingled
all of their senses tingled
The fervid fire inside her
felt like it would consume her
making her forget
the things sheβll later regret
She tried to deny her intense fondness
but Kismet had a hand more or less
chose her soulmate
for she got the kiss of fate
Β©Winnie, Musings
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Day 13 of August Falls Poetry Challenge 2019
Word prompt: Kiss of fate
Beautifully written. Tender and romantic poem
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Thank you! π
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A pleasure
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Beautiful poem. Captured the essence effectively
Thanks for sharing
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Thank you for your appreciation! β€οΈ
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the fire
inside
decried
a need
for speed
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Sigh
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I know, right? Sigh
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You sure do π
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Romantic and beautifully written β€οΈ
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Thank you! π€β€οΈπΊ
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That’s cute and intense for the love they shared..π
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Indeed! π
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Oh wow, this is beautifully penned Winnie!β€οΈ
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Thank you, dearest! π₯°
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A cute romantic expression!π
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Thank you! πππΊ
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A lovely piece, Winnie!
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Thank you, Warren! ππΌ
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Youβre welcome!
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So beautiful! Very beautiful, the feeling are so real and really captured that sensual feeling of the first kiss with a person who hunger to be with.
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Thank you, Jess! I can write romantic poems but not romantic novels. π
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Oh… so what’s the genre of your novel in progress?
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Fantasy. My daughter is my inspiration. She used to read my short stories and prodded me to write fantasy. I would love to write a crime thriller but after I finished the fantasy. Kailan kaya? Iβm too distracted nowadays.
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Fantasy sounds great! I look forward to it.
Maybe you need to have a writer’s retreat. Away from all distraction. To be honest I’m the same but I try to write even just one page a day.
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I would love to go on a writerβs retreat. I admire you for your dedication in writing. And you have a small kid. I have grown up kids but their being on a science school demand most of my time. Pressured ang pag-aaral dito. They do their homework and stuff but they have activities at school which we are required to participate as parents.
My eldest asked me earlier about the progress of my novel and I felt ashamed for abandoning my writing haha. π Good thing my husband brought my laptop. I can write in the evening. Iβm staying at my momβs house now.
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Yeah, kababasa ko lang ng post. Wish you the best Weng, I know how hard is it. I hope you’ll find someone trustworthy to help you take care of her soon…
I’m sure your kids are proud of you for putting them first. My novel writing gets done mostly when my son is asleep or on a walk with my husband.
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Thank you for your kind words, Jess. My husband and I are going to my mom’s province tomorrow. We’re going to try our relatives if there is one or two willing to become a caregiver for my mom.
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Ang hirap humanap, Jess! Una, ayaw ni sister yung nirerekomenda. Yung iba pag nalaman na ang sitwasyon umaayaw na. Mahirap kasi ihandle si mommy ngayon kasi lumalayas sa bahay at hinahanap ang bahay nya. Ang bilis pa maglakad. Pag nakasumpong pa puro negative ang iniisip kaya gusto lumayas.
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Nagsisikip dibdib ko para sayo… but I’ll pray na sana makahanap kayo ng mabait at matulungin na tutulong mag alaga sa mommy nyo.
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Thank you, Jess. Letβs cross our fingers for the true caregivers Iβm waiting for. Our only hope is the one who is about to finish her training this 20th.
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Ooohππ
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