Treading along the pristine white sand
massaging my bereft feet in an almost like dreamland
Feasting my eyes on the beauty of the cerulean ocean
want to plummet, to taste its saltiness even with my clothes on
Hypnotized by the soothing ocean’s motion
Sinking into oblivion
I had a Premonition
which came from a vision
The wind carried a soft operatic rendition
whispering for me to pay attention
On the cave from afar appeared an apparition
beckoning me towards her out of my own volition
Suddenly, the calm waves of the ocean
crush force like an army in rebellion
If not for the apparition
I must have faded into oblivion
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Love this post ππππit’s beautiful
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Thank you for appreciating it π
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So that apparition was your saviour? Lovely poem btw. π π
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I wish. This was only fiction π. Thank you for appreciating it π
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It was my pleasure reading it. π π π π And ofcourse u wrote it very well. π π
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Aaawww. Thank you again π
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π π π π π π π π
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Truly Amazing Winnie!!πβ€
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Beautiful π as it is!!!
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Thank you for appreciating it! β€
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Amazing work always
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Thank you as alwaysπ
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Beautifully written. I love the way you ended this. Bravo.
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Thank you always appreciating my work π
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Appreciating your work is the easy part.
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Thank you β€οΈ
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Amazingly written.
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Thank you! β€οΈ
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Beautiful poem!!!! π
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Thatβs a nice compliment from a great poet like you! π
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Amazing!
Wonderfully melancholic Winnie.
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Thank you, Shreya!
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