I heard your whispers in the night
a Zephyr carried them with its broad-winged flight
a deep heartfelt sound
as I was about to turn around
You woke up all the sleeping fragrance
from the ground even at a distance
pervaded my senses
pushed past my defenses
You lifted the colossal boulder
blocking my vision over and over
made me see things clearly
and I love you for it dearly
I heard your whispers in the night
I heard you this time, my golden light
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Wow. So comforting words. God bless you Winnie dear. πππΉ
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Thank you so much, my dear friend. That means a lot. God bless you more! πππΌ
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You are always welcome dear friend. π€πππ
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Wow, I loved thisππ»ππ
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Iβm really glad you loved it, Anjali! πβ€οΈπΉ
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A beautiful poem. Loved the end lines.π
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Thank you so much! πππΌβ€οΈ
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Youβre welcome π
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Its soothing ….and filled with so much solitude.
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Hello, Mich! Sorry I havenβt replied to all your wonderful comments. Iβm now catching up. π Anyway, thank you! Iβm glad you like it. β€οΈ
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Take your time Winnie..π
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Thank you, Mich! πβ€οΈ
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Waw… This is lovely and beautiful… Liked it… ππ
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Thank you for your lovely comment! So sorry for the late reply.
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Fabulous post
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Thank you so much! ππΌ
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Please read my first post
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Okay!
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Please read my first post
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Sure!
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your final couplet makes me want to have a love like that too Wnnie, such a pure and nurturing love you both have, God is happy and blesses you both richly.
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Thank you, Gina! β€οΈ We went through a lot and he understands me more now. Thereβs truly a rainbow after the rain.
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you are both blessed to have each other, true love is when its tested by hardship, i love your pretty rainbow of hope
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So very true, Gina! We celebrated our 20 years last month if I may add.
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oh wow, congratulations! that is so wonderful, many more years ahead to the two of you
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Thank you for that wonderful wish, dear Gina!
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Reblogged this on Ace Friends & Bloggers News.
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Thank you so much for reblogging! β€
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I like that deep inner work of removing the boulder, so significant.
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Thank you, Paul. I’m glad this resonated with you.
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It sure did, and more so because I was working on a theme of baggage. π
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Beautiful
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Thank you, dear! π β€
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Absolutely beautiful Winnie! So much love!β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you, gorgeous Richa! I appreciate the comment. β€
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Very, very nice!
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Awwww! Thank you, Ren! I appreciate your lovely comments. Have a great day!
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Spectacular poem to behold in the mind’s eye – in other words, blown away by the dazzling imagery!
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Awww! That’s a great compliment from a great poetess like you, Isha! Thank you! β€ β€ β€
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Humbled by your graciousness!
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glad to hear your relationship is working π
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Thank you! β€οΈ
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most welcome π
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Nice use of words…a special piece indeed
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Thank you, dear Pri! So sorry for the late reply. You know what happens to most comments.
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Amazing is too smaller word to describe this
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Awww! Thank you so much! β€οΈ
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Lovely!
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Thank you! π
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My pleasure
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So uplifting and beautiful…a gentle fluttering balm to soothe the soul!π π π€
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Awww! Thank you so much, Jenna! Iβm really happy to know that. πβ€οΈπΉ
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You’re very welcome Winnie!π β€οΈ π
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Lovely β€οΈ
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Thank you! πππΌ
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Poetry means that the love you write is very poetic. And the conclusion you are loving someone.
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I very much appreciated it.
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Beautifully worded poem
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Thank you for your appreciation! π
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Beautiful! Loved it! β€οΈ
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Thank you! β€
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So beautiful and comforting πΌ do visit my trout here https://sunniesmybunnies.wordpress.com/2019/03/22/thought-of-the-night-2/
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Thank you so much! Iβm really sorry for the late reply. πΉ
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No worries πΌ
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